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Submitted: December 14, 2006
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Make: Canon
Model: Canon EOS 20D
Shutter Speed: 1/160 second
F Number: F/11.0
Focal Length: 40 mm
ISO Speed: 100
Date Picture Taken: Oct 26, 2006, 3:37:32 PM

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Since Advanced Critique is Encouraged: I really like this (and not just because I like the Absolute Ad's) you placed the bottle exactly right in the middle, and you gave the bottle that "glowing" look! I like that the Berry background gets darker at the edges of the picture. You basically took the right font, just that Absolute Ad's always have a white font.


Well...nice job ;), I actually really like it a lot.

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Fabriqué en Chine.
thanx for that, great criticism :)
You're Welcome! ;)

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Fabriqué en Chine.
A couple things with this, I like the berrys on either side, adds something new to a shot that almost everyone's done, and the glow looks good, nice job on that. Maybe next time get some light on the emblem at the top of the bottle to get some definition, and switch to a longer lens, theres a little bit of distortion on this one. Overall a good shot though.

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~Ansel Adams
I love this, well done :)

The *blueberries* look nice too ... :P

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The sooner you do something, the sooner you have to do it again ...
the bottle back back lit and then the currants were side lit :)
great lighting on the bottle and berries.. the side lighting gives a nice bit of texture to the berries, and it's subtle enough to not overpower the bottle. there's a few little mishaps on the bottle selection, but other than that it looks great :)

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